Tita
Rostyana
THE
LOYALTY
PLAYERS
EMILY,
20,
careless, cute, long hair, dark eyes
ELDON,
21,
good-looking, kind, tall, dark hair
BEDE,
21,
good-looking, tall, fashionable, tan
SCENE
1. It
is rainy day. EMILY
wakes up so early to make a cake for her boyfriend. EMILY
goes to the kitchen quickly. She tries to find the materials for the
cake. She looks at the clock for couple times, because she waits for
ELDON
and he doesn't come yet. Then, ELDON
comes and helps EMILY.
ELDON
(starting
conversation).
Why don’t you just buy a cake in the pastry shop? I think there is
good one.
EMILY
(annoying).
Because mine is better.
ELDON.
OK, whatever! Then just do it.
EMILY
(really
annoying).
Then just let your mouth closed, and let your hand help me to prepare
all the stuff. Is it clear?
ELDON
(calming
and smiling).
Anything you want.
SCENE
2. Under
the rain with her umbrella, EMILY
has arrived in front of BEDE’s
house. EMILY
knocks the door, and then a woman comes from the behind of the door.
She is BEDE’s
mother.
BEDE’S
MOTHER (surprising).
Oh EMILY?
EMILY
(smiling).
Hi!
BEDE’S
MOTHER. BEDE? But he is not here, and he didn’t say that you?
EMILY.
Oh really? Then I’ll…
BEDE’S
MOTHER. Ye, yes I’m sorry.
EMILY.
All right, see you.
SCENE
3. EMILY
is sitting on the chair, looking out of the window in her bedroom.
She is holding her mobile phone, trying to call BEDE
but she gets nothing.
ELDON
(entering
the room).
Everything is wrong, right?
EMILY
(trying
to explain).
Nope, he has an important thing to do.
ELDON
(asking).
Is it an excuse?
EMILY.
Yes, yes that's why he acts like a stranger lately.
ELDON
(angrily).
Then prove it! Just prove it, can you? It’s not the first time even
sometime you had caught him with his women. (ELDON
trying to make Emily
realize).
But why? You are ignoring his freaking attitude with your freaking
loyalty?
EMILY.
Uhum.
ELDON
(hearing
EMILY’s
phone ringing then asking).
What did he say? It’s him, isn’t it? Why does he contact you? Is
he apologizing to you? Wh, what did he say?
EMILY
(answering).
Nothing. He wants to see me.
ELDON.
Let me see him. You don’t need to see him.
EMILY
(surprising).
What? What will you do? Just stop it, ok?
ELDON.
What do you mean?
EMILY
(explaining).
I mean it would be more complicated if you see him. All right, I like
your caring, I love everything you did. Well, now I really need you,
but I just need you to listen no more. It is between BEDE and me and
even you don’t have any right to know more about this. So, so
please just stop it.
ELDON
(feeling
disappointed).
That's all? So you never realize anything? Don't you feel something
all this time? You, you are just… whatever!
SCENE
4. It
is the day when EMILY
should meet with BEDE.
Before lunch time comes, EMILY
has been sitting in the café with a cup of coffee on the table.
EMILY
has been sitting there for minutes, waiting for
BEDE.
BEDE
(greeting).
Have you waited so long? I’m sorry.
EMILY
(exciting).
Ouh it’s ok. BEDE?
BEDE
(answering).
Yes why?
EMILY
(asking
a question).
Um, why didn’t you answer my texts these days? I’m worried, and
you know I hate to feel it.
BEDE
(trying
to explain).
I have some works to do quickly, so I didn’t have any time to
answer your messages. I’m sorry. But, never mind! I have something
to tell anyway, so I asked you to come here.
EMILY
(wondering).
OK?
BEDE.
You know me better than my self, right? And you know that even I do
something bad right now, it just to make our relationship better in
the future. You know how much I love you, you know how mean you are
to me, and you…
EMILY
(asking).
Well I’m sorry BEDE, but I didn’t get you.
BEDE
(explaining
clearly).
Honestly, I feel that our relationship is too boring. No, it is not
you. It may because I feel… well then can’t we break for a
moment? I think we need time to stay apart and yea without any
interaction or yea you know what I mean.
EMILY.
Who is she?
BEDE.
I’m sorry, I’m really sorry. But I promise that it won’t be
long. Please, let me go, I promise that this will be the last. I just
want to make sure that you are the best partner for me. I... I don’t
know, but you know that I really love you, but I just need to be
apart of you sometime. I will be right back to you, I promise.
Please, just patient to wait for me. Not long, I promise. Just wait,
it is not the hard thing right? Please, would you?
EMILY
(answering
and feeling disappointed).
Alright then, just do it!
SCENE
5. It
has been two weeks since EMILY
met BEDE.
EMILY
is laying on her bed. EMILY’s
heart starts to doubt about BEDE’s
words, and starts worrying him. EMILY
feels have no energy to do her activities. That's why EMILY
just stays in her room for all day.
ELDON
(entering
the room).
Why?
EMILY.
I don’t know.
ELDON.
EMILY please, don’t hurt your self. How long you will stay on this
way? How many women that he got to hurt you? What else? You know he
doesn’t good enough for you, but why EMILY?
EMILY
(calmly).
Because he is the one who comforted me, the one who makes me feel
save.
ELDON.
Didn't I? Wake up EMILY and realize it.
EMILY
(answering).
You did, and you are better.
ELDON
(asking).
So? You realize it, you know it is wrong, then why? Take my hand, and
make the new one. At least let’s make everything better.
EMILY.
My loyalty!
ELDON
(angrily).
Fuck for your freaking loyalty. You know what? You need to respect
other to be respected. Before you make somebody else happy, you need
to make sure that you are happy. Before you are being loyal to other
people, you need to make sure that you are loyal to yourself!
SCENE
6. It
has been a week since EMILY
argued with ELDON,
and they are not seeing each other all these times. EMILY
is sitting in the café right now. She looks on her phone for many
times, it looks like she is waiting for someone. Suddenly ELDON
comes, and he looks around the café looking for someone he knows.
ELDON
(asking).
I’m sorry. Have been you hungry?
EMILY
(answer
disappointedly).
Nope, but I think I could eat a horse for this lunch.
ELDON
(laughing).
Really? Then where should I get one?
EMILY
(sulking).
Oh come on ELDON…
(Since
they didn’t meet each other for a week, it is the first time they
meet. After they argued about BEDE’s
attitude toward her, EMILY
has started to think clearly for days. Then she realizes that what
ELDON
said is true. EMILY
starts forgetting BEDE,
and sees ELDON
as the one who really cares about her.)
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